what i learned in this class

problems(8) is important for me. i was teached how to order of supportin ideas.

sentences that are part of the same idea go together.・sentences can go in chronological(time)order.
sentences can go in order of importance (see explanation below).

this is important.

also,in this class i studied about how to true use of conjuction and adverb,etc.
the most difficult things for me are to contain three different types of sentence.

a topic sentence - tells the reader the topic and main idea of the paragraph.supporting sentences - develop,explain,and give details about the idea of the topic.a concluding sentence - restates the topic sentence, summarizes the paragraph,makes a prediction,or gives adviceor suggestions.

but,i became write the paragraph

my new year's resolution

my new year's resolution is to eat all baumkuchen in kobe.
i love baumkuchen, so i'm looking forward to eating it.

that's impressive! kashiwabara is ヤバい!!!

now i am very drunk ...
because i was drinking with my friends at bar in Nanba just now
i saw them for the first time in half year
nobu,koike...i felt afresh they are my best friends